You kill Sandone who sacrificed for Traveler to buy time - ok.

Then you make epic battle - ok

Scene where Columbina looks at dead body of Sandrone - ok

In this moment you as a person are strugling emotionaly, can someone confirm she is really dead? Can we help her? Is it really over? We have Moon Goddess, we have Genius inventor Aino. What is the next scene? Are we crying?

And we got timeskip few days - ok

WE GET A SCENE OF WAKING UP, EATING, PAIMON BURPING.

At this point you want to know what happened as soon as possible right? Traveler looks fine just tired, it looks like Sandrone is all right or in coma otherwise traveler would be quite down that someone sacrificed for him right? So you as a player only care about this specific info.

Then a scene with League, and then another with Nicole, still no info about Sandrone.

So you are stressed with another scene where Wanderer with Arle finaly confirm to you that she is dead. You are shocked as a player. One of the best characters is killed and there is NO PROPER FAREWELL SCENES!! NO CHARACTER REACTIONS!!! NOTHING!! Just a simple one sentence that Columbina stayed with her body few days!? SORRY WHAT?? You are building whole story with lovely character interactions and now you suddenly don't bother to let me properly mourn character who sacrificed for me?

Then Paimon goes ooooo you gonna finaly learn about your ship! I DON'T CARE ABOUT SHIP RIGHT NOW! Best girl just died and story does not show anything related to that! Such important event took place entirely off screen!! And now I am disconnected from the story.

This is one of the biggest storytelling failures of entire time.

If you kill character who died for us you either let us say goodbye to it by properly establishing its death with some scenes or make some kind of massive foreshadowing that this character will be back in future to not makes us worry. Here Sandrone was treated like not important unneeded character. Nobody was shown to care for her death so that player would resonate. WHY?! You had time to include some scenes with random NPCs about some bullshit but character reactions to Sandrone death?

This destroyed the rest of the story for me. Up until timeskip it was 10/10.

After Sandrone death 3/10 max.

Massive L.

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