I'm STILL reeling from Nod Krai. I can see the problems with it and simply do not feel that way about any of it. Loved it all the way, and last night at 4am while lying in bed these lyrics just sort of popped up in my head, and I immediately wrote them down on my notes app, and used this snow day to record an accompaniment to a Miku rendition of them. Still learning with Miku and mastering and etc, but I'm reasonably happy with how this came out!
*Lyrics:*
*Through the night,*
*I reach out to you,*
*Silver scattered in the twilight.*
*Silently,*
*a veil of frost and dew,*
*casts a spell over the wilds.*
*And the chill of winter air*
*I fill with comfort,*
*moonlight gilding the cracks in your heart.*
*Through the glass of frozen tears,*
*I still long for you,*
*wishing that you'll find the traces of my light.*
*So I wait for the dawn that you'll*
*bring to me,*
*I arrive through the dark and brittle sky.*
*And the cold eternity that I*
*bear for you,*
*pales before the warmth and blessings of my stars.*
Away_Artichoke_36872026-01-27 04:37
Side Note: Columbina's rewrite isn't that deep - things get rewritten all the time and stories change constantly when given time. If the "original" version you created in your own headcanon is better to you than the character we got, that's not surprising. It's pretty tough for a story to connect with you more than the one you're already expecting after mulling on it for years, after all.
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*Lyrics:*
*Through the night,*
*I reach out to you,*
*Silver scattered in the twilight.*
*Silently,*
*a veil of frost and dew,*
*casts a spell over the wilds.*
*And the chill of winter air*
*I fill with comfort,*
*moonlight gilding the cracks in your heart.*
*Through the glass of frozen tears,*
*I still long for you,*
*wishing that you'll find the traces of my light.*
*So I wait for the dawn that you'll*
*bring to me,*
*I arrive through the dark and brittle sky.*
*And the cold eternity that I*
*bear for you,*
*pales before the warmth and blessings of my stars.*